Rendezvous at the Ezra Pound Centennial Conference (1985)

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Book Edited by Hank Nuwer (Henry Nuwer) & Robert Waite for Idaho State University Press

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An Appreciation of Ezra Pound, Editor

by Hank Nuwer


A sign posted on a Ball State University department of journalism bulletin board reads:  "The strongest drive is neither love nor hate; it is the urge to change another's copy."  Someone has crossed out the word "change" and scrawled the word "alter" above it.  I'd like to think Ezra Pound would have appreciated that effaced sign.  Other than his drive to write, perhaps Pound's strongest creative drive was his compulsion to alter the lines of his fellow writers.  An able editor and an energetic supporter of fellow artists, Pound profoundly affected the lives and works of the best twentieth century writers. He was literature's equivalent of a baseball talent scout, a bird dog at recognizing promise in aspiring poets and novelists.

From 1908 to 1920, the period that Pound lived in England, he worked for several literary periodicals, and he influenced many young poets.  He contributed verse and served in various editorial positions at  Poetry, The Dial, The Egoist  and The Little Review.

Pound--like Ezra, his biblical namesake--was a lifelong reformer. Pound became impatient with the progress of poetry during the first decade of the twentieth century, claiming what was written lacked intellectual depth and stylistic grace.  Most poets, he believed, aspired to mediocrity and fell short of that.  "Serious people" of the time did not write poetry, said Pound biographer Noel Stock, regarding such work "as balderdash."

Pound, in the 15 February 1912 issue of The New Age , emphatically made his editorial stand clear.  "As far as the 'living arts' goes, I should like to break up cliché, to disintegrate these magnetized groups that stand between the reader of poetry and the drive of it, to escape from lines composed of two very nearly equal sections, each containing a noun and each noun decorously attended by a carefully selected epithet gleaned, apparently, from Shakespeare, Pope, or Horace."  Moreover, in that issue, Pound attacked the pomposity and excess he recognized in too many now-forgotten bards of the day.  "We must have a simplicity of utterance," he declared, "which is different from the simplicity and directness of daily speech....  This difference, this  dignity, cannot be conferred by florid adjectives or elaborate hyperbole; it must be conveyed by art and by the art of the verse structure, by something which exalts the reader, making him feel that he is in contact with something arranged more finely than the commonplace."

Pound believed that the ideal poem was one in which a "twofold vision can be recorded" form a marriage of "the perfect rhythm joined to the perfect word" (Stock, 117).  He maintained that when a poet's technique was unpraiseworthy, not even the most wonderful imagery could salvage a work.  "Don't chop up your stuff into separate iambs," he once said.  "Don't make each line stop dead at the end, and then begin again every next line with a heave.  Let the beginning of the next line catch the rise of the rhythm wave, unless you want a definite longish pause."

Pound exhorted poets to strive for plainness of expression, urging them to strip the suet from the steak.  He said that poetry achieved a heightened effect when derived from economy of expression.  "Twentieth-century poetry," he predicted, "will, I think, move against poppy-cock."  He hoped the genre would become "harder and saner [and] as much like granite as it can be."  He predicted, "We will have fewer painted adjectives impending the shock and stroke of it."  The perfect poem, believed the poet, was "austere, direct, free from emotional slither" (Stock, 109).  In addition, as a spokesman for the Imagists, Pound argued for the need to strive for precision and "an exact rendering of things" (Stock 127).

The young Pound shared Edgar Allan Poe's conviction that any word unessential to a work should vacate the premises.  Nor did Pound tolerate the use of indefinite language.  "Use no superfluous word, no adjective which does not reveal something," he wrote in a Poetry essay in 1913.  "Don't use such an expression as 'dim as lands of peace'," he advised.  "It dulls the image.  It mixes an abstraction with the concrete.  It comes from the writer's not realizing that the natural object is always the adequate symbol.  Go in fear of abstractions.  Do not tell in mediocre verse what has already been done in good prose."

Pound not only rendered advice, he also possessed a talent for detecting flaws in poetry manuscripts, making him the ideal  pre-publication reader.  When poets asked him to inspect their new poems, he compulsively dragged his pencil like a rake across each page, stopping only when scattered leaves were stacked in neat piles. Moreover, according to biographer Eustace Mullins, Pound frequently failed to wait for an invitation before editing manuscripts.  At literary gatherings he jerked new work from the hands of poets reading new work aloud, amending lines that ruptured his sensibilities.  No reputation was too established for Pound to criticize. In his role of foreign editor with Poetry, he persuaded William Butler Yeats to send him unpublished work.  Yeats, then in his late forties and an acclaimed poet, gave his young friend a poem entitled "Fallen Majesty";  Not the least bit star struck, Pound cleaned up Yeats' final line, changing it  from "Once walked a thing, that seemed as it were, a burning cloud"; to "Once walked a thing that seemed a burning cloud." Pound printed the latter.

After Harriet Monroe, Poetry's founder, named Pound foreign editor in 1912, he told her that he desired to publish "modern stuff"; with "the laconic speech of the Imagistes.” Specifically, he demanded work with "no excessive use of adjectives, no metaphors that won't permit examination" (Stock, 112). He also wrote an essay in 1911 for the Poetry Review that expressed similar views on what constituted good verse. “I believe in an `absolute rhythm,”;, which corresponds exactly to the emotion or shade of emotion to be expressed.” He stressed in that essay “`that the `proper and perfect symbol,’ was the natural object and that if a poet used symbols he should so use them that their symbolic function did not obtrude; so that `the poetic quality of the passage’ was not lost to those who did not understand the symbol as such, to whom, for instance, a hawk was simply a hawk.” He maintained that the content of a poem was either “solid or fluid,” meaning--according to Noel Stock--that “a poem might have form as a tree has form or as water poured into a vase.”

That Pound followed his own dictum is seen in an examination of his tightknit, powerful body of work during the decade preceding his 1920 publication of Hugh Selwyn Mauberley, a collection of eighteen poems that marked a shift in Pound’s emphasis--moving from aestheticism to social commentary. During this period the poet achieved desired directness and cast off stilted mannerisms. Writes Stock, “His diction [was] clearer and he applied more art with less…effort.” At that time in Pound’s career, the poet consciously and ruthlessly tried, in his words, “to new-mint” language, eliminating “such encumbrances” as set moods, set ideas, conventions.” The result of Pound’s application of his own strict principles to his work was the creation of compelling, yet simple poems such as his colorful and emotional two lines “In a Station of the Metro.”

The apparition of these faces in the crowd;
Petals on a wet, black bough.

Pound was a good self-editor. He set ruthless standards whether composing lines or editing them. “Mastering an art does not consist in trying to bluff people,” he declared in The Little Review. “Work shows; there is no substitute for it; holding one theory or another doesn’t in the least get a man over the difficulty.”

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One of the strongest influences upon Ezra Pound’s writing and editing was Ford Madox Ford, a titan of a literary critic and a titanic business failure who saw all his enterprises sink. Ford edited the English Review, a London magazine whose December 1908 maiden issue carried the work of Thomas Hardy, Joseph Conrad, H.G. Wells, John Galsworthy, W.H. Hudson, and Henry James. The archives in the English Review must have pleased young Pound to be around, for he loved all things literary, and he manufactured the “look” of a poet with his preference for pince-nez spectacles, a cape, and a walking cane he used to make imaginary rapier thrusts at passersby. Ford kept up similar appearances. He threw extravagant dinners at the magazine’s offices at 84 Holland Park Avenue, piling additional debt that eventually deprived him of English Review ownership. Such a life was heady stuff to Pound and Ford, who seemed blind to the drunkards passed out below the publication’s gilt-plated name plaque and impervious to the odors of decaying garbage and stale fish. Located in one of the city’s seedier districts, The English Review conducted business one flat above a fishmonger’s shop.

  Despite his faults in business, Ford recognized literary genius.  As a publisher, he paved the way for big breaks for not only Pound but also D.H. Lawrence.  Pound published his experimental “Sestina: Altaforte” in the June 1909 English Review, sharing billing with Galsworthy, Wyndham Lewis, Conrad, and Hilaire Belloc.  Ford, theatrical as he was, nonetheless taught Pound an enduring lesson. When Pound brought his less-than-polished Canzoni collection to the English Review offices, Ford shocked the poet, after reading, by gasping and then rolling on the floor. Pound amended his copy, and later he claimed Ford’s acrobatics saved him two years of misspent work.

Pound delivered similar harsh judgments upon new work by writers, albeit never by leaving his heels as Ford did. So scathing was his reaction to poet William Carlos Williams’ first book that Pound prefaced a 21May 1909 letter with comments by leading with a warning: “I hope to God you have no feelings. If you have, burn this before reading.” After coldly assaulting the book’s flaws, Pound, in that same letter, urged his disciple to study certain poets of first and second rank (in Pound’s estimation).”Learn your art thoroughly,” advised Pound. “Remember,” he told Williams, destined to win the Bollingen Award and a Pulitzer Prize for poetry, “a man’s real work is what he is going to do, not what is behind him.” Eleven years after this letter, Pound wrote another scathing letter to Williams, informing him that strong editorial criticism was critical if literature was to flourish. “If you weren’t stupider than a mud-duck,” Pound wrote Williams, “you would know that every kick to bad writing is by that much a help for the good.”

Likewise, Pound berated editors who delivered what he considered to be foolish or uninformed judgments of his work or that of other poets. Like other writers, Pound suffered much stupidity at the hands of editors. T he North American Review rejected Pound’s modern poem on a modern subject, “Portrait d’une Femme,” because the opening line supposedly trilled too many r’s, violating Tennyson’s rule forbidding consonant repetition (Stock 111).

After absorbing too many ill-advised editorial rejections, Pound wrote a letter that referred to editors as “swine” who “do more harm to contemporary letters in America than all the public bad taste and ignorance put together.” He proposed that books should “be compiled by impartial patient students, having no personal ax to grind.” He concludes. “It would be of great national service” and provide the students with fodder for their doctoral dissertations.

Pound became an editor in 1912 when a Chicago poetry enthusiast named Harriet Monroe hired him as foreign correspondent and editor of her Poetry without having interviewed him. She hired him on the say-so of Elkin Matthews, an editor and early proponent of Pound’s work. Pound proved to be a good choice. He possessed energy and patience for developing young writers, and he somehow had the stomach to forge literary relationships with other editors and even with critics. “I do see nearly everyone that matters,”he boasted to Monroe.

Pound’s dreams for Poetry were grand or perhaps grandiose. He hoped to inspire an “American Risorgimento,” an “awakening,” he said, that “will make the Italian Renaissance look like a tempest in a teapot!” Energetically, he recruited submission for poetry with the benefit of experience gained watching Ford hustle for potentially publishable work for The English Review. Unlike Ford, Pound sometimes had divided loyalties to more than one publication. In addition to Poetry, in1913 Pound served as literary editor of  The New Freewoman, a feminist publication that Pound succeeded in getting renamed The Egoist in 1914. Pound published the work of such Imagists as Amy Lowell in The Egoist, but eventually he put his passion into Poetry because The Egoist devoted insufficient space to poetry and criticism, in Pound’s opinion.

To judge Pound as editor, it is crucial to know what he considered to be the characteristics of a good editor. In one letter, Pound insisted that certain “cardinal points” determined who is and who is not a good editor. Two of his criteria certainly describe his accomplishments as foreign editor of I namely, “Whom do they print?” and “Whom did they print before the author had a reputation.”

Among the contributors Pound lured to Poetry were Yeats, Rabindranath Tagore, and Ford. Pound thought Tagore’s translations of the Indian poet’s own work to be “very beautiful” in English (Stock, 120). Tagore asked Pound to edit all his translations before forwarding to Monroe in the United States. “Please do not hesitate to make corrections when necessary,” Tagore once wrote Pound. “I do not know the exact value of your English words. Some of them may have their souls worn out by constant use and some others may not have acquired their souls yet.”

Of more importance to literature than the aid and comfort Pound gave established writers such as Tagore was his ability to promote little knowns and unknowns possessing talent. Pound’s self-proclaimed “captious and ultrabilious eye” read, with appreciation if not always approval, the work of emerging writers Williams, Ernest Hemingway (accepting six poems), Robert Frost, Hilda Doolittle (H.D.), Richard Aldington, Carl Sandburg, D.H. Lawrence (“detestable person but needs watching,” Pound told Monroe), and T.S. Eliot, author of what Pound called “the most interesting contribution I’ve read from an American.”

Pound, according to Hemingway, was only able to devote about twenty percent of his time to his own writing. The rest of the time he was caught up with the affairs of emerging writers, many with little of Pound’s talents. “With the rest of his time he tries to advance the fortunes, both material and artistic, of his friends,” Hemingway said in a 1925 essay. “He defends them when they are attacked, he gets them into magazines and out of jail. He loans them money. He sells their pictures. He arranges concerts for them. He writes articles about them. He introduces them to wealthy women. He gets publishers to take their books. He sits up all night with them when they claim to be dying and he witnesses their wills. He advances them hospital expenses and dissuades them from suicide. And in the end a few of them refrain from knifing him at the first opportunity.”

Patient as he might be with questionable talent, or so Hemingway said, Pound nonetheless quarreled with Monroe when she dared print inferior work sent her by Poetry friends and benefactors. “Good editing, as I see it, means the most effective presentation of whatever is on hand,” said Pound, chiding Monroe in a post. “If I stay on the magazine it has got to improve;. I will not have my name associated with it unless it does improve.” Pound told poet Amy Lowell (letter of 8 Jan. 1914) that he had protested against what he considered shoddy practices by quitting his editorship but then reconsidered. “I resigned from Poetry in accumulated disgust, and they axed--a.x.e.d--me back. I consented to return on condition of general improvement of the magazine,”;--which won’t happen--so I shall be compelled to resign permanently sometime or other.” Sometime came November 1, 1918, when Pound mailed his final outraged letter to Poetry.

By that date, Pound’s new allegiance was with the Little Review , a Chicago periodical financed and edited by Margaret Anderson since she founded it in March, 1914. Pound agreed to become Anderson’s unsalaried foreign editor, no doubt impressed with the slogan: “A magazine of the arts, making no compromise with the public taste.”

Pound’s most significant achievement as an editor with the Little Review is that he persuaded Irish author James Joyce to submit his serialization of Ulysses. In addition, he published the work of Wyndham Lewis and other members of Pound’s own Vorticist movement. By January 1918, Pound also became disenchanted with the Little Review, robbing him, he noted, of the energy that ought go into his own writing. “I am, for the time being, bored to death with being any kind of editor,” he wrote Anderson.

In 1919 Pound departed the Little Review, but the urge to edit remained. In 1921 and 1922, Pound performed what he called his “Caesarean Operation” on friend T.S. Eliot’s The Waste Land. Pound’s influence upon Eliot has inspired numerous critical studies. Suffice to note here that Eliot enthusiastically adopted Pound’s editorial changes in The Waste Land manuscript and dedicated that most influential poem to his mentor/editor. Eliot said that Pound not only helped him improve his “verse sense,” but influenced him in subtle ways. “I have in recent years cursed Mr. Pound often enough; for I am never sure that I can call my verse my own; just when I am most pleased with myself, I find that I have caught up some echo from a verse of Mr. Pound’s,” admitted Eliot.

Pound edited even the critical prose of his pupil. On one occasion, disturbed upon reading some ill-tempered commentary by the usually moderate Eliot, Pound admonished him. “That’s not your style at all,” clucked Pound. “You let me throw the bricks through the front window. You go in at the back door and take out the swag.”

Pound’s interest in editing declined steadily over the next four decades, but he occasionally collected his energies for editing project she deemed worth his time. In 1928, Pound and his wife Dorothy published a magazine, The Exile, which is best remembered for publishing a cryptic poem by Hemingway (“Neo-Thomist Poem”), contributions from William Carlos Williams and Gertrude Stein, a part of canto 20, and Pound’s writings on politics and economic issues. The Exile lasted four issues. In 1931, Pound became a contributing editor to The New Review--circulation 73--but left that doomed publication after writing just one essay. Not surprisingly, Pound was unable to get along with one of The New Review’s chief editors.

The last thing needing to be said here is that even if Ezra Pound never had written one word of poetry, he contributed much to literature with his editing. It was said of Shakespeare that he never blotted a line, but those who appreciate good writing should give thanks that Ezra Pound blotted so many.



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